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Galactic Traveler

Galactic Traveler Alone in time and space Lost in eternal paths And orbits that you trace Cosmic cartographer Through nothingness you turn In hope some distant eye Could faintly see you burn Transiting the heavens Resplendent angels' course All of your life unknown Viewed vividly in force Eclipsing every eye Lightning speed, sudden flash Earth's extinction event Reducing us to ash 8/26/2016

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Laura Hay

Date: 9/21/2016 10:26:00 AM

Loving your acrostic galactic poem, well deserved win Jesse, warm regards, Laura.

Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/22/2016 7:47:00 AM

Thank you for the like.

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/18/2016 4:13:00 PM

Such a great Acrostic poem that images the unending galactic space and how insignificant and vulnerable Earth is in its scheme. Well done, and congratulations on your Trophy First Place win, Jesse. Sandra

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/18/2016 3:16:00 PM

Congrats on your tip top win, Jesse! Great poem in your acrostic :)

Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/19/2016 7:30:00 AM

Thanks for the comment

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/18/2016 2:38:00 PM

Great! Congrats!

Ironic Zink

Date: 9/18/2016 1:46:00 PM

What's up Jesse!? Congrats on the big win! and Thank You for your entry

Ironic Zink
Date: 9/19/2016 11:27:00 PM

You have been slaying the acrostics... I've yet to place 1st but I am not giving up...; Keep on being you and never stop writing no mater what : "they" say!!!

Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/19/2016 7:29:00 AM

This is awesome. Thanks for the recognition.

John Fleming

Date: 8/26/2016 12:49:00 PM

Very cleverly composed, Jesse - Excellent lines! My best regards. :) john P.s A seven.