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~3rd Place~
Contest: Shark In The Soup 
Sponsor: Anthony Slausen
Judged: 01/05/2019

~2nd Place~
Premiere Contest: Word Play - Galactic
Sponsor: IrOnic ZiNk
Judged: 09/18/2016

Galactic soup, the Lord wished for, one day when he felt empty, bored; some nutrients to give him more alternatives to be explored. With hydrogen and helium, He then stirred in some oxygen; mixed carbon next then added some strong iron, neon, nitrogen. He took a taste, but still not done. The flavor needed silicon, some sulfur and magnesium; enough, for now, to work upon. His soup was done and it was grand; created by his expertise, a perfect flavor, strong not bland. And so the Lord felt quite at peace. But he had stewed a giant bowl and way too much for him to hold. To share it was his brand new goal and so he managed something bold. He flung his prized galactic soup into the void in which he lay... with a big bang, eternal swoop, His Universe was born that day. And from His soup, all life emerged from gentle lambs to sharks that bite. And likewise, humans, He diverged to yellow, brown, red, black, and white.

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Date: 1/6/2019 5:34:00 PM
Very interesting and gorgeously written :) Congratulations!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/14/2019 8:14:00 AM
Thank you very much, P.S., for your nice comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/6/2019 2:25:00 PM
A wise theory on how the universe was created, Sandra. A new take on the "big bang" theory. Congratulations on your win in Anthony's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/14/2019 8:13:00 AM
Thank you, Carolyn. So pleased that you enjoyed it. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/6/2019 7:21:00 AM
Awesome write, Sandra. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/14/2019 8:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/6/2019 3:46:00 AM
what a unique take on the contest theme, many congrats Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/14/2019 8:12:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jan! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/21/2016 10:31:00 AM
I really do love this Sandra, its very intelligently put together, well done and congratulations too. Warm regards, Laura.
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Date: 9/18/2016 3:56:00 PM
Very creative poem, Sandra! Love the soup concept, of course, and the words flowed so well! Congrats on your fine win :)
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Date: 9/18/2016 3:41:00 PM
Creative verse. Very well written. You are full of inventive ideas and good ways to express them. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 9/18/2016 1:50:00 PM
Congrats on your placement in my contest and thank you for your entry. Best Regards. Chris.
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Date: 9/2/2016 3:40:00 PM
What a great Big Bang (a theory currently in dispute) story. Loved it! :-)
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Date: 8/22/2016 7:43:00 AM
This is great Mrs Sandra. I also love the photo. You know I'm a bit of a science geek. Such a fun read. I know it will do well. Your poems are all so well written. Good luck!
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