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Gail Force 9

The tide crashed more and more, Wave after wave flew up the shore, Fisher men where blind by the seas robust mist, Trying to avaid the seas harsh fist, Lightning bright and thunder so loud, All hidden behind the giant clouds, The sea protests to take his final breath, As the sailors plumet to their deaths, As the gail force 9 reached its crown, The boisterous waves came souring down, Weather men warn do not dare, For you dont know what could happen out there.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/6/2016 1:17:00 AM
STACEY NICE TO READ THIS POEM AGAIN
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Date: 4/24/2016 9:12:00 AM
Stacey Connor, nice to see this one again. linda
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:46:00 PM
Hi Stacey, this is such an excellent first posting! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/20/2015 3:02:00 AM
Stacey, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/19/2015 5:45:00 PM
Stacey, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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