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Gaia

Garnering a myriad colors from the sunlight and sparkles from the silvery moon She embraces nature in her bosom and embellishes the cerulean sky. No God is born without a womb Nor the devil without a mind, Her loin spawns the firmament as she breathes the universe into motion; Her milk forms the streams, the lakes, the flowing rivers and the vast oceans, Her tears form the rolling clouds and nourishe the flora and fauna, She rides upon the wings of the wind and heralds the sun-god each day in its burning chariot. When she shuts her eyes she causes icy wilderness When she opens them It blossoms into the Elysian Fields. ~11/27/15 ~Open Poetry contest by Charlotte Jade Puddifoot

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Date: 12/15/2015 11:30:00 PM
ABDUL, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 12/15/2015 7:39:00 AM
A beautiful dedication to Mother Nature..... Congrats for your placement in the contest, Abdul! ;-)
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/15/2015 5:44:00 PM
Thanks Teddy.
Date: 12/14/2015 4:10:00 PM
Congrats Abdul on your placement.
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Date: 12/14/2015 3:36:00 PM
Full marks for this creative poem, Abdul. I love it, especially the last stanza. ~ Congratulations for a much deserved win. // paul
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/15/2015 5:42:00 PM
I am glad you liked it, Paul. Appreciate your comment very much.
Date: 12/14/2015 2:29:00 PM
A very interesting and well written piece..I also like the last stanza..congrats. BG
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/15/2015 5:43:00 PM
Thanks Barbara. Appreciate your comment.
Date: 12/14/2015 11:05:00 AM
this is another well written poem from you - i do like your writing - and those last four lines are particularly strong and really make the poem - congrats on your win in my contest!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/14/2015 11:34:00 AM
Thanks Charlotte, appreciate your comments very much and the placement.
Date: 12/14/2015 10:55:00 AM
Congrats Abdul!
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