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Gabrielle

Gabrielle...long ago I fell prey to her predatory spell like a fallen angel in a bottomless well twisted tale of love and truth that i've gotta tell Gabrielle...sweet beauty transforms into a sour beast from the top of her crown to the bottom of her feet from the largest to the least she leaves me weak while she's subtracting my strength her lunacy has no length Gabrielle...cold conquest queen Gabrielle...turning whispers into whirlwinds and dreams into nightmares her pretty face turns into a menacing stare where iron eagles dare i fly away with her straight into the sun i melt in her madness like a rabbit on the run Gabrielle...blasting shots from her love gun Gabrielle...running fast forward but i'm still in reverse what i thought was a blessing was an evil erotic curse Gabrielle drives the herse and places flowers of forever on my sinful shallow grave Gabrielle...now eternally i'm her soul slave

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Date: 1/3/2011 10:45:00 AM
Hi Anthony: Very interesting poem. I liked the line "her pretty face turns into a menacing stare", reminds me of someone I know, lol!!! Peace: Sheol
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Date: 12/28/2010 4:35:00 AM
Gabrielle could be the woman at the well. and you the man she never married. wonder if she's talking with Him right now? how wonderful that would be.
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Date: 12/27/2010 9:55:00 PM
What a wicked wicked gal this Gabrielle. Love that name you used for her. Kind of Poe-ish! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/25/2010 9:40:00 AM
wow! What a story,, i feel like Gabriella, and the way she fell and transformed her emotions.. love it... and how have you been my poet friend,, nice to have seen you stop by my poetry today,, hope you are enjoying your x- mass... have a save one,..p.d.
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