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Trying to write about my late wife,for present and future family members, I realized I may be getting off track. Then I realized like a never before seen painting,it was more their perception than mine that was important.
Life related in linear is boring.
Assembling letters.
Creating Information.
Climbing a unnatural,
Structure from my perception.
But, is it mine?
For this structure rebels,
Creating walls,
To block my letter flow.
Creating sinkholes of doubt.
Is this assembly of words,
Perceptive or inane?
Does it freshen minds like,
Vegetation in the rain?
Or does it reveal,
Furrows of words.
That veer off in error,
As I guide my pen,
Seeing only with,
The eyes of my vanity
Copyright © Kieran Pavlick | Year Posted 2014
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