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I could trace back in the past Since my disorganized mind can't handle all of the excitement I feel an urge to discover something new, but what's there to dig up? I could explore a new terrain...but my mind can't keep up I feel like traveling back in time Perhaps I could have one more chance to change my past decisions But it's just my imagination...soaked up in grubby grime The unbearable sense of impoverishment...ruins my ambitions

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/10/2011 1:21:00 AM
YOU CAN KEEP UP! Bro...I choked on a pistol twice! NO where to go. ...GUESS WHO MIRACULOUSLY healed me? ME .....maybe with the help of the gods, God, the Devil, WHO KNOWS! All I know is I got off my sappy behind and Changed! Here is something I came up with ....A line that saved me : "WE are constant prisoners of our own mind. Fortunately, we too, are the WARDEN!" ---No body is gonna hunt you down, WHEN , not IF , but WHEN you break free ...TODAY! Do it for YOU. Nobody else will do it!
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Date: 4/14/2012 2:04:00 PM
Haha! :] Thanks for the encouragement. Have a superb weekend. -DWB

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