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Fuse With Spring

. See us her in pastel flowering and the long strands of her hair from the gentle breeze of Spring dancing See us as we frolic under the soft touch of Spring's sun See us as we fix our eyes to each other while Spring's rain tenderly cools our excitable flesh See us fuse with Spring

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Date: 5/19/2011 5:16:00 AM
Stopping by this morning to let you know I enjoy reading your poetry very much. I want to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. May the sun always shine upon you and bring inspiration to your soul James. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/21/2011 3:12:00 PM
A delicious spring fantasy, Sir James. There is nothing like being hit by those warm spring rain drops after an absolutely horrendous winter. Love, daver
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Date: 4/7/2011 12:38:00 PM
enjoyed this piece of creative poetry. thank you for reading The Old Train Depot and for your comment
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Date: 4/7/2011 9:10:00 AM
My Maiden Voyage is posted .. first kiss luv poem for contest James.. maiden voyage..first kiss.. sound OK to u luv?
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James Peranteau
Date: 6/2/2021 11:24:00 PM
It sounds great dear poet...Uv course u knew that would indulge me when....heck, more so now...lol much love, James...never to late to say ty dear Linda...please read my last post and share with our friends here, I think they all gave me up for expired az our beloved Daver uv yore.....much love, james
Date: 4/4/2011 11:08:00 PM
Awesome write! Spring is definitely here and you captured it well. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 4/4/2011 6:03:00 PM
I like how you twine nature and human intent. Nature is an ally of human fealty.
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Date: 4/4/2011 3:10:00 PM
boy I wish it would get to New England brrrrrrr Light & Love
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Date: 4/4/2011 2:57:00 PM
So very beautiful!hope Noah is fine and you too dear poet.
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Date: 4/4/2011 2:56:00 PM
James, I sent you a regular email (not Soup mail). Please let me know if you don't receive it. Important info to share with my friends. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/4/2011 12:42:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today and will be back again soon to read more James. May you have a week of good health, joy and sunshine to light up your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2011 12:28:00 PM
Lilting and lovely lines compsed here James my friend.. a special write alluding to luv and mixed with Spring sensations luv.. seeing myself in your lines ... seeing u with pen and paper in hand under a lovely tree writing poetry .. awesome as always u amaze me luv..
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James Peranteau
Date: 6/2/2021 11:26:00 PM
*u fluster mine cerebral
Date: 4/4/2011 9:47:00 AM
There is something about spring that evokes passion and romance. You have captured it beautifully in your poem, James. Wish you and I could dance beneath the sun together. Thanks for your ind words on Daniel. Love, Carolyn
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