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Further Than the Heart Allows

beyond the sun another moon, and just as cold © Kristin Reynolds 5 22 09

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Kathryn Collins

Date: 4/24/2012 6:21:00 AM

Kristin - So succinct and fully packed. There are so many gems in your repertoire. love, Kathy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/1/2009 7:27:00 AM

A very poignant haiku, Kristin, and so very true.. the best kind of verse... thankxxx and bravo... Linda-Marie

James Fraser

Date: 6/6/2009 3:45:00 PM

True words in this Haiku Kristin, and the further away the colder>James

Hana Ryusaka

Date: 5/28/2009 6:56:00 AM

It's amazing how much meaning you have packed into this compact form... I love this line. "Just as cold". Great job!

P Sheart

Date: 5/25/2009 6:38:00 AM

Hi Kristin I goota love this! Knowing we're not alone in this universe, I sit and ponder your words with much intuitive insight. You sure do know how to spark our inspiration hun! Hope you and your family is having a good Memorial Day! Miss you. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

C. E. Mcmullin

Date: 5/23/2009 8:18:00 PM

. . . ne'er love to thee, kind. - is what slammed across the frontiers of my mind, as I contemplated your most excellent work; another favorite for my collection Thank-You for your most welcome comments, the gifts of heart that prod me onward. love, poet butterfly :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/22/2009 9:08:00 AM

Very poignant reminder of the coldness that awaits us as we explore our "universe," even if it is an internal one. Great write on many levels, Kristin! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/22/2009 8:44:00 AM

You can pack into so few words....a whole world of meaning....

Brian Strand

Date: 5/22/2009 8:18:00 AM

But different in the scheme of things Kristin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commnts

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/22/2009 6:26:00 AM

Hmm...makes me think of 'dark side of the moon'. Always so much even to a few lines of yours. So excellent. Have a beautiful weekend Kristin. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/22/2009 4:10:00 AM

This is really awesome...love the title... and yes the further you venture the coldness still resides.