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Furry Friend

As a kitten, he ran away the moment I opened my door, or saw the bright crack between the door getting bigger. I knew the secret spot he loved to come and dine; I put a share of my meals on that spot each day. As you expect, he warmed up. Now we are close buddies; sometimes I feel as though I'm in a company of a human, with its breathing and stare, as though it knows what I'm saying or doing. It rubs my legs with its furry tail, whenever I return home from work. I wish my girlfriend acted that excited, every time she saw me…..

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Date: 6/27/2016 9:19:00 PM
Teddy, nice to see your furry friend win. Love SKAT
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/28/2016 2:43:00 AM
Thanks Skat!! *^_^* My feline friend would have been really happy if he understood the message of my poem, lol....
Date: 5/12/2016 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations on this wonderful write and great win as well my dear friend Tedd! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/28/2016 2:40:00 AM
Hi Leonora. Thank you so much for your applause, and enjoying my work!! *^_^*
Date: 5/7/2016 7:05:00 AM
Cute, lovely and with a great ending. You two boded very well. Congrats on your fine win. // paul
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/7/2016 10:26:00 AM
Indeed we make a good team, lol. Thank you so much for your appause Paul!! ;-)
Date: 5/6/2016 9:07:00 PM
Teddy, i thank you for the support =(^.^)= RoyalT
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/7/2016 4:08:00 AM
Welcome Royal, anytime ;-)
Date: 2/27/2016 9:11:00 AM
Good descriptive poem, especially the end lines. Janice
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/29/2016 3:43:00 AM
Thanks so much Janice!!! *^_^*
Date: 2/25/2016 9:09:00 PM
hahaha. the last part made it SO good. Yes, don't we wish our lovers were as sweet as those cute pets
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/26/2016 3:23:00 AM
Hehehe. True Andrea....
Date: 2/25/2016 8:01:00 AM
That last line was a dagger. Made me chuckle. Enjoyed the read, Teddy. Have a great day, Peace:0
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/25/2016 8:03:00 AM
Thanks Daniel... Have a great day too!! ;-)

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