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“The US First Cavalry arrived in Manila on February 3, 1945; it proceeded to Santo Tomas University north of the Pasig River, where 3,785 Allied civilian prisoners of war had been kept for over three years” from internet article: Liberation of the Philippines 1945
Twelve years in a Chinese mission followed by three years in prison with over three thousand others, me, mom, four sisters, two brothers. Daddy had been killed in Hong Kong; a fact we didn’t know for too long. Funereal time: nightmarish February 3, we cherish. Back in America, time passed; Mom ran an orphanage at last; Her kids, her finest residents; seven lives, the best evidence. Some seventy-eight years later back home now with my Creator Funeral time: celebration February 3, my day, done. written: February 17, 2023 Sponsor Constance La France Contest Name Writing Challenge -F Words

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Date: 2/22/2023 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!!  What a lovely yet sad write/story. Very sorry for your loss. Have a great/blessed day writing away............................
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Date: 2/21/2023 5:01:00 PM
Congratulations! Interesting. All of these stories need to be told…people to be remembered. Sorry for your loss.
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Date: 2/21/2023 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Interesting information. Sara
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Date: 2/21/2023 8:29:00 AM
thank you Sara. I didn't know my Sara's mother but she must have been some lady to have survived life's challenges. She was a Canadian, but settled in our small city in Indiana which had just opened an orphanage at the right time. God's timing is perfect.
Date: 2/21/2023 2:33:00 AM
Reason, an emotional poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge F Words, well done, I like the quote also, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/21/2023 8:24:00 AM
thanks, Constance, Sara became nurse/teacher in dealing with diabetes. After retirement, she tutored primary age children in reading and math at the school where my grandchildren attended. Never a dull moment when she was around.
Date: 2/20/2023 6:11:00 PM
Sad story with a happier ending Reason. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 2/20/2023 6:25:00 PM
Thanks, Linda. Sara was a good friend who had many stories to tell. She lost the hearing in her left ear when she crawled under a fence and stole food from the overseers' garbage can. He hit her hard.

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