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Fun Is What Ever We Make It

Fun is being care free. Joining others together in activities Filled with glee. Adventures high in varied joint festivities We try! Each ones Proclivities Done! Fun is being care free. In varied joint festivities Glee! Date: March 10, 2022 For: “Let’s Minichu on Fun” Poetry Contest Sponsored by Mohan Chutani Syllable count verified on Poetry Soup counter Placed 4th in contest

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Date: 3/12/2022 5:12:00 AM
This poem has a gleeful side that brought me joy. I think carefree is always one word but I like the way you separated it, probably for emphasis.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/12/2022 5:53:00 AM
It’s time we all enjoyed a little fun with carefree or Care Free~ felt a bit of a dichotomy there….don’t you think? :)Paulette
Date: 3/11/2022 1:00:00 PM
fun is being carefree and hanging out with friends who share a like mind, glad we hang out, your fun !
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/11/2022 2:28:00 PM
The feeling is mutual! :)Paulette
Date: 3/11/2022 5:49:00 AM
This is really nice, Paulette:) p.s. kindly check the form once again...
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/11/2022 8:45:00 AM
Just made the adjustment....can't thank you enough. :)Paulette
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/11/2022 8:38:00 AM
Thank Jo~thought I had it right but will revisit it. I appreciate your input. :)Paulette
Date: 3/10/2022 2:52:00 PM
Hello Paulette Yes fun is what we make of it. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/11/2022 10:37:00 AM
Hello Paulette, you are welcome . Hugs.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/11/2022 8:45:00 AM
Thanks Darlene~it was a "fun" write. :)Paulette
Date: 3/10/2022 1:12:00 PM
Too right Paulette, it’s the carefree nature that puts the absolute paradigm in fun, Haven’t tried this form before, you sure make it look like fun, but I’m sensing it’s not easy, all the best in contest, cheers David
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/11/2022 8:46:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by to visit~it is a new form for me~quite fun to write. Try it! :)Paulette

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