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Fully Booked 2

As your heartbeat echoes mine we dance to the ocean tune in slow anticipation. Tender is the night. --------------------------------- 23 rd June 2016

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/24/2016 5:45:00 PM

very nice romantic write, Paul, good luck in the contest. Thank you so much for reading my poems. Hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 6/25/2016 4:26:00 AM

Good morning, Eve. Thank you for reading and liking this short poem. I was away for a few days due to health reasons; now playing catching up:) hugs // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/24/2016 4:51:00 PM

Very lovely and so romantically expressed, Paul. Best wishes for the contest -- this should do well! Sandra

Paul Callus
Date: 6/25/2016 4:24:00 AM

Thank you for the positive comments, Sandra. Luck was not on my side....the contest filled up too quickly...or perhaps I was too slow:) Regards // paul

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 6/24/2016 3:29:00 PM

This one is beautiful and romantic Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/24/2016 4:24:00 PM

Thank you for reading and liking, Sara:) Have a lovely weekend! // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/24/2016 2:04:00 AM

Beautiful Dodoitsu. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/24/2016 3:50:00 AM

Thank you for being the first to comment, Ravi. Glad you enjoyed. Have a nice weekend. ~ Regards // paul