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With deliberate conviction, She blew head strong through convention. Her heart gave way to moods stubborn, Freeing her vengeance to govern. She scratched, clawed, to feed her demand, Now floating crumpled down to land. Sin deep disease collapsed her stand. June 11, 2016 / Fully Booked / Nette Onclaud GRAPES OF WRATH 5th Place ... CayCay Jennings 8 Syllables per Line, 7 lines Rhyme scheme: a/a, b/b, c/c/c

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Date: 7/2/2016 3:02:00 AM
Congratulations on you win CayCay! ; )
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Date: 6/22/2016 7:19:00 AM
Congrats and well done on your deserved win. Great poem
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Date: 6/15/2016 4:37:00 PM
Pleased that you finally managed to enter the contest, CayCay...and that you claimed a merited sloton the winners' list! Congratulations! // paul
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Date: 6/14/2016 3:01:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Caycay. Glad to see you on the list and I miss you!!
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Date: 6/14/2016 3:49:00 AM
cay, a riveting, contemporary approach to the theme; very strong!..thanks for being part of my contest and warm congrats!...huggs
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Date: 6/12/2016 8:27:00 PM
Compelling and deeply dark. Chills CayCay! It is sure to do well in the contest. #7 ; )
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Date: 6/12/2016 7:16:00 AM
Intense poem CayCay, nice rhyme.
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Date: 6/12/2016 6:02:00 AM
I like your take on this title, CayCay; incidentally I also chose "Grapes of Wrath". After lots of attempts I finally managed to enter the contest; hope you did, too! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 6/11/2016 6:47:00 PM
yours is dark, like mine, Caycay. I really like the form you came up with. This contest is SO much fun, isn't it?
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