Full Moon Thugs

punk kids sagging pants no belt needed tonight guys gonna be a full moon bright fools showing off jewels khakis fall past crack of Don wave of cops demand "PANTS UP" *this poem was written for Russell Sivey's Contest--- What Happens During A Full Moon? and is a special ode to all the youngsters who feel the need to express themselves by wearing pants 3 times too large that sag around the crest of their buttocks in public*----by~ JSLAMBERT

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Lisa Cooper

Date: 11/7/2011 3:21:00 PM

now I got a great big moon faced smile from this art work thank you very much!

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 11/2/2011 8:23:00 PM

Good One JS....thanks for the comment on my poem.. haven't been on much... school is kickin my a$&...lol

John Aaron Green

Date: 10/30/2011 10:23:00 AM

that makes me laugh,,,lol,,,very creative idea,,,i see the same thing.....

Anne Rutherford

Date: 10/26/2011 6:35:00 AM

Sometimes when I see this I must hide my laughter, one fellow even dropped pants to the knees ,just pulled them up and kept going. Great take on the new generation. Anne.

Dean Wood

Date: 10/26/2011 1:36:00 AM

mad poem. ive heard that the wearing of trousers especially by blacks is from a time way back when money was scarse and the younger children would be handed down the older brothers clothes thus allways being to big and obviously the bigger and baggy,er the trousers the bigger the brother you had..........how true that is i dont know but its got a kind of poeticness to it that allways makes me smile lol. mad poem tho.....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2011 11:22:00 PM

hahaha. crack of don. what a great line!!!