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Emptied bottle, drunk really feeling lighter than bottle should have

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/9/2014 5:50:00 PM
You may not feel as light in the morning.
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Neelam Sangwai
Date: 4/10/2014 10:22:00 PM
Ha Ha ! really. :)
Date: 4/9/2014 5:40:00 AM
Short but the message is clear. but what did i learn from it? i don't know. may be it's because it's narrative.
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Neelam Sangwai
Date: 4/10/2014 10:21:00 PM
It was just a play with words. Thanks stopping by and communicating.

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