Home » Poems » Sandra Haight » Full Circle

Sandra Haight | + Follow Poet |

Full Circle

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Sandra Haight.

Full Circle Seasons… Mother Earth’s womb Births Spring Springtime… Rebirth of life Brings joy Joyful Trees and flowers Budding Buds spread Petals offer Sweet scents Scenting Air with fragrance Of blooms Blooming Spring till summer Fulfilled Full rich Long summer days Hotter Hot days Of late summer Cooler Cool days Transform trees to Bright glow Glowing Leaves of Autumn Soon fall Falling Bright leaves become Dried life Lifeless Winter chill brings First snow Snowfall Brightens Earth with Whitewash White snow Spreads marshmallow Splendor Splendid Holiday time With snow Snowdrifts Disappear with Sun’s warmth Warm days Of sun, rain bring New spring Springtime… Rebirth of life Brings joy © Sandra M. Haight 2014 All Rights Reserved ~2nd Place~ Contest: Mussetle Train Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux Judged: 01/04/2015

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2015 9:49:00 PM

It sure does help...thank you for the reply

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2015 8:58:00 PM

Great win Sandra... LINDA

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/11/2015 9:41:00 PM

Thank you so much, Linda. I love the way contests help us to learn how to use new forms. This one was challenging, but I loved it. Hugs, Sandra

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/10/2015 12:32:00 AM

I love the imagery, Sandra, and how you circled around to spring again. Congrats on a great win!

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/11/2015 8:46:00 AM

Hi Rhonda, thank you so much for your nice comment and congrats. This form was really a challenge! Hugs, Sandra

Abdul Malik

Date: 1/6/2015 11:47:00 AM

You did pretty good, Sandra. You chose a nice theme and nice title.

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/6/2015 7:42:00 PM

Thank you so much, Abdul, for your nice comments. I really appreciate it. Sandra

Abdul Malik

Date: 1/6/2015 11:45:00 AM

You did pretty good, Sandra. You chose a nice theme and the title. Very nice.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/5/2015 11:32:00 PM

This is outstanding Sandra, I kowtow for the flow here; congrats on the win my friend...huggs

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/6/2015 7:43:00 PM

Thank you, Kayod5. It was a fun one to work on. Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 1/5/2015 4:16:00 PM

Well done Sandra! I must say you make a great train driver! This is very cleverly done, considering that it's not an easy form to use. Your high placing is very deserved! Congratulations! // paul

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/5/2015 5:03:00 PM

Hi Paul, thank you so much for your nice comment and congrats! No, not easy, but fun! Yours was amazing! Thanks again, Sandra

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/5/2015 3:20:00 PM

Great Job! Congratulations.

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/5/2015 4:07:00 PM

Thanks, Richard. Thanks so much for my placement. I really enjoyed your contest and had such a great time working on this form! Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2014 9:19:00 PM

You chose an excellent way to address this topic of a "train" type of form. I did one that is really silly and I don't know if I dare post it. I want to try a different one, but in my opinion, this type of form is too limiting. It does not allow for a good flow because you are always repeating similar words. Anyway, for what it is, you did it magnificently.

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/5/2014 8:01:00 AM

Thank you so much, Andrea, for stopping by with your supportive comment about my poem. I found it more difficult than I thought it would be...yes, very limiting. I'm sure you will present something lovely! Just don't forget that extra step to enter it! Wish they could modify the site so that the option to enter a contest is integrated on the submit poem page. Thanks again! Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2014 9:16:00 PM

sorry about your snow dance, dear. I too have forgotten to enter two poems in different contests this past month!! It is so disheartening. Let me read this one now. the picture is very intriguing.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/4/2014 7:58:00 AM

Very well penned Sandra my dear friend! :) love and hugs! Xxxx D.

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/5/2014 9:00:00 PM

Thanks once again, Dorian. It was fun to work on. Hugs, Sandra

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/4/2014 3:09:00 AM

Great poem u hv come up with Sandra! A real mussetle train! gl in contest!

Eve Roper

Date: 12/3/2014 11:04:00 PM

Beautiful poem, I love the way you put the words together. Good luck in the contest. blessings eve 7

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/5/2014 9:01:00 PM

Eve, thank you so much for stopping by with your nice comment, support, and best wishes for the contest. I really appreciate it! Sandra

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/3/2014 7:33:00 PM

Wow Sandra. This is the best I have seen so far, including my own. It is truly a masterpiece. 7+fav

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/3/2014 10:05:00 PM

Hi Brenda, thank you for the nice positive comment and support! It was fun to work on. Thanks again! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 12/3/2014 3:57:00 PM

wow - I never wanted this train to stop - it flowed so beautifully - great write Sandra good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/3/2014 10:06:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan! Hugs, Sandra