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Fugitive

I wanted in my poetry cup Neither fixed heat nor cold Sought just to raise it up Close to your hair gold No centre is required to write A poem of beauty or struggle Rather a fugitive’s might To bring out those lovely bubbles We live mostly in thoughts Of pictures and colors various Trying to untie the knots To unleash your eyes hilarious This is a fugitive world At the margin of the bell curve When it is fruitfully unfurled There is a dance in your nerve Were there no fugitive thinkers To mix dream with the reality No poetry would ever shake the drinker To draw you close to me It is an asset dear friend That the words are my companion Yes I swerve from the mainstream no doubt And pursue my pen in abandon And the result is fresh morning Green leaves and sometimes bouquets Many a time they come adorning Fugitively orange days _________________________________ March 12, 2016

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Date: 6/29/2016 10:01:00 PM
Such visions your words create what a marvelous world
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/30/2016 12:34:00 AM
Glad that you like ... thank you ...
Date: 4/13/2016 6:01:00 AM
Greetings Probir. Congrats for your well,deserved first placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/13/2016 6:35:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 4/10/2016 10:33:00 PM
Probir Gupta , thank you for the lovely reply... I am smiling. LINDA
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/10/2016 10:38:00 PM
Great. The more the better....
Date: 4/9/2016 9:27:00 PM
What an entrancing poem. Your metaphorical fugitive is absolutely true for us poets ... we are victims to the puppet strings of our muse! "Trying to untie the knots to unleash your eyes hilarious" "Yet I swerve from the mainstream no doubt and pursue my pen in abandon" ... a lot of unusual phrasing here, written in your own unique voice. That's how poetry progresses methinks, by pushing the envelope on what's considered "normal" ... awesome first place win! I enjoyed it a lot.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/10/2016 12:21:00 AM
Aah, Had English been my first language and then had I been able to speak in the tongue you do, may be I would have got a slice of the blue sky at my table.... Thank you for reading and commenting...
Date: 4/7/2016 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your very well-deserved win Probir! Hope to see more of your poems in the future! :) -HANS
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/8/2016 4:14:00 AM
Thank you so much HANS...
Date: 4/6/2016 11:56:00 PM
Probir Gupta, congratulations on your awesome "Fugitive Win." Linda
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/6/2016 11:58:00 PM
Congrats from you is most welcome. That you like it is a satisfaction indeed.
Date: 4/6/2016 10:43:00 PM
Probir, congratulations on you win!!! Great insight and thought.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/6/2016 11:59:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve...
Date: 4/6/2016 1:09:00 AM
Congrats, Probir. Very impressive write that gives lots of insight to the inner person. Well done.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/7/2016 12:00:00 AM
Thanks Susan...
Date: 4/5/2016 7:38:00 PM
Great take on the theme my friend, congrats on your top spot
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2016 9:10:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 4/5/2016 5:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win well written x
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2016 9:19:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 4/5/2016 4:51:00 PM
"It is an asset dear friend, that the words are my companion..." such true words for us poets...we are such fortunate 'fugitives'! Wonderfully done, Probir! Congratulations on your top of the podium win. Sandra
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2016 9:23:00 PM
As for you, so far I understand from your poems, you are certainly prone on getting into fugitivity... Thanks Sandra....
Date: 4/5/2016 4:00:00 PM
Coingrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 4/5/2016 12:23:00 PM
Congrats on the top slot, Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2016 12:29:00 PM
Thanks Balveen. Your "Sorrows bypass" is a joy read. I was about to congratulate when you outdid me... Still, Congratulations...
Date: 4/5/2016 11:49:00 AM
Excellent write, Probir. Congratulations on your win...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2016 12:13:00 PM
Thanks Charlie for your encouraging visit and comments...
Date: 4/5/2016 10:53:00 AM
Probir, congrats on your top placement in the contest!! :)-luloo
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2016 11:06:00 AM
Thanks Laura...
Date: 4/5/2016 9:46:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem and congrats on your win!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2016 9:59:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 4/5/2016 9:18:00 AM
Great thoughts, Probir. Congratulations on your win, your top win. Love these phrases which you used..."fugitively orange", "dance in your nerve", and "fresh morning". Enjoyed the read.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2016 10:01:00 AM
Thank you for reading " the fugitive " with love and pleasure...
Date: 4/5/2016 4:40:00 AM
Congrats on top podium with this amazing write Probir..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2016 10:03:00 AM
Thanks Upma for your kind greetings...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2016 4:43:00 AM
I don't know how my response to Stephen got inserted here. Sorry. And thank you so much Upma for your encouraging comment...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2016 4:40:00 AM
Thanks Stephen...
Date: 4/5/2016 4:22:00 AM
congrats well done stephen
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2016 4:44:00 AM
Thanks Stephen...
Date: 4/5/2016 2:27:00 AM
A splendid poem, winning first place out of seventy entries, so well done.
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Julia Ward
Date: 4/5/2016 8:30:00 AM
"My fugitive words / Could reach Ward" and they did. :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2016 4:39:00 AM
Lots of thanks Julia. My fugitive words/ Could reach Ward/ Along with the metaphorical birds....

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