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Fugitive

Once a jade vision Briefly twisted in the breeze Now brown and demised

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Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/24/2010 9:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest, Laura..Jimmy

John Freeman

Date: 4/23/2010 6:35:00 PM

Congratulations Laura, on your success in Raul's contest. Agape, Moses

Date: 4/23/2010 12:28:00 PM

Good use of imagery in your poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/23/2010 6:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Descending Grace contest Laura. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/23/2010 6:25:00 AM

Congrats Laura on your winning poem in Raul's contest... wonderful words to depict the photo..enjoy my friend..luv.. Linda-Marie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/22/2010 11:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Laura. Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/22/2010 11:20:00 PM

Laura, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/22/2010 7:19:00 PM

VERY, VERY NICE! I think you captured the image in the picture creatively. The second line is absolutely awesome! I see a big win in your future, Laura. Love, Carolyn

Eleanore Bourner

Date: 4/22/2010 7:01:00 PM

i love this one, looks like a winner best of luck in the contest! ------Ell

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/22/2010 6:47:00 PM

Love the title....!!! Wonderful poem, Laura! :)