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Frustration

We are just machines This is now known And this processing we skip Causes glitches and faults We can go back and fix it But it takes forever So we are pushing on Getting only to the point of fault Then failing again Yet we've switched off the signal The outside sees the working machine Notes a glitch, thinks it the machine taking over Talking over someone when they are speaking This machine is out of control! Why do I talk over? It's not take over, not like you say It's me, all the versions of me Existing all in that moment Frustrated that no one understands Or me, thrilled to exist It's all the versions that cannot wait Of the broken machine That should go back a bit and get fixed Trying to communicate With another broken machine That has the signals switched off Though that one looks to clockwork for answers If I approach the inner workings of the clock I'll be tore up in it's teeth I'm talking over myself now And can't finish the poem I wouldn't do that if I had a choice

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Date: 4/23/2024 6:43:00 PM
An intriguing poem. You described frustration well. I liked the comment on talking over someone. It is also frustrating. This poem on a simple emotion delves deeper and feels like a full day's accomplishment.
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Date: 4/23/2024 10:00:00 PM
Thank you Hilda x
Date: 4/23/2024 10:05:00 AM
A brilliant piece, nicely done, Dilly
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Date: 4/23/2024 10:25:00 AM
Thank you very much - I had no idea when I wrote it that it would be a hit :)
Date: 4/23/2024 9:40:00 AM
Your "Frustration" is a powerful write. Life is filled with it... Have a blessed day writing away.........................
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Date: 4/23/2024 10:25:00 AM
Thank you Paula, appreciated
Date: 4/23/2024 2:33:00 AM
This poem got me in DD...a masterful self dialogue with touching and quite disarming honesty. A unique voice DD. Take care my friend...
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Date: 4/23/2024 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Paul, I hadn't got the notification there was a comment and was just re-reading this morning's vibe and spotted it. It was written in 5 minutes so I couldn't forget, although there's possibly scope for a proper poem from the content. I appreciate you stopping by, thank you
Date: 4/23/2024 12:39:00 AM
What a brilliant write this is dear dd, you alwYs write so well! And this analogy is creative and hits strong! So many lines stood out for me especially “ It's me, all the versions of me Existing all in that moment Frustrated that no one understands Or me, thrilled to exist“ powerful! That really resonated with me and i love the way you phrase things! Its unique and clever makes you stand out for me! I absolutely felt this one and its a fave for me! The ending too is just impeccable
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Date: 4/23/2024 12:54:00 AM
Thanks Ink - I appreciate the fave and your supportive words. Just capturing something in the moment, so it's perhaps a bit visceral rather than thought out. I appreciate your kind words, congratulations again on your POTD

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