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Fruits of Patience

a muddy way has to be crossed wait until it becomes dry it's raining too much take shelter somewhere suitable it's to dark night if now facing why? certainly patience's lost while it was needed is it not that suffering feed back for the same if a banana is blew to ripen before its due time everything becomes useless so patience is must to have a suit fruit

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/1/2017 6:10:00 PM

Yes it takes patience to grow a fruit. That is so true. have a nice evening my friend.

Lynn Marie

Date: 9/28/2017 3:12:00 AM

Ooh I I just love the 'banana' line. What a great message, so creatively crafted. Patience with myself is a slow work in progress...lol yet your beautiful poem helps me to understand so much better. thank you BL:) a fave

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/1/2017 1:39:00 PM

Thanks my dear lovely friend for your appreciation and for keeping this poem in your fave. list. Loved always...........,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/23/2017 1:49:00 PM

- You are completely right, dear friend - Unfortunately, my patience is not "very long" ... :))) - Lovely written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/23/2017 2:36:00 PM

You are genius i know and have a lot of patience which is enough to have victory. Thanks my lovely dear friend. Loved always, bl