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Fruitless

Right before my eyes it has begun to wither. The trust is rotten.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/30/2014 10:39:00 AM
Puzzling. This could be Haiku or Senryu, depending on its meaning. I like the "fruitless idea. Love, daverI
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Kira Price
Date: 4/30/2014 1:11:00 PM
interesting perspective I guess it could be. Thanks daver for pointing that out! ~Kira
Date: 4/29/2014 9:11:00 PM
Nothing like being deceived by trust. .That's one of several pet-peeves of mine..It surely makes an individual fruitless. .. love this Haiku of yours. Thank you for the kind visit and comment. :)
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Date: 4/30/2014 1:11:00 PM
exactly! and no problem thanks for stopping by ~Kira

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