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Fruitful Summer

Fruitful Summer ( X Factor) The summer season has come to play Displaying beauty and good cheer Pleasant sunshine, gentle rain A dreamer’s heart to please Skies are clearly blue Nature’s splendor Fruitful time Precious All the Way Way All the Precious Fruitful time Nature’s splendor Skies are clearly blue A dreamer’s heart to please Pleasant sunshine, gentle rain Displaying beauty and good cheer The summer season has come to play Erich J. Goller Copyright X Factor style- by Erich J.Goller--11.12.2011 20 lines - the first 10 lines--9/8/7/6/5/4/3/2/2/1 syllables Second 10 lines reversed first 10 lines- 1/ 2/2/ 3/ 4 5/6/7/8/9 syllable Rhyming - line 1 and line 10-- and line 11 and 20 any subject--
Contest entry for Concrete/shape

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Date: 7/20/2012 9:49:00 PM
Erich, Such a wonderful new form for me to read this evening...Curious if it is your own poetic invention?...Craig Cornish is having a shape/concrete poetry contest...this one is well worth entering...anticipating an exciting new book in the horizon...hahah...gwendolen
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Erich Goller
Date: 7/21/2012 8:36:00 AM
thank you very much Gwendolen, I'm glad you liked the form, yes it is my own poetic creation, thank you for the contest info. Hugs!Erich
Date: 7/20/2012 3:33:00 PM
I love the X Factor style and your sweet summer poem Erich - well done - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Erich Goller
Date: 7/20/2012 4:27:00 PM
thank you very much Anne Lise,I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and style/Hugs!Erich

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