Fruitcake Oh No

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Dorian Petersen Potter.

~Fruitcake Oh No! ~ (Couplet) Fruitcake, oh no! I don't like I'd rather give it to Mike. Fruitcake tastes to me more than bad If you give me one I'd get very mad. Fruitcakes are not really fun you see So please don't send one to me. Fruitcakes tastes like a nasty piece of rubber Just thinking of them makes me shout and shudder. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 January.21.2016 Author's notes: A children's poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

White Sage

Date: 1/22/2016 7:11:00 AM

fruitcakes...i guess you don't have such a nice side with it, excellent write Dorian

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/25/2016 5:02:00 PM

Hi!Thank you ever so kindly,White Sage,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply I appreciate it:)) No,no, that isn't me! fruitcakes are just fine enough for me, not crazy about them to tell you the truth, but still I don't mind having a slice or two, once in while especially during the Christmas holidays.That was my son David the one who disliked them quite a lot when he was a little boy growing up, and who inspired me to write in the end this childrens poem:)) Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you!:) D.