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Frozen Window

Beneath the lush green meadows of my heart, ready to bloom when the wind sways them, there were frozen chunks of snow, that had never molten into drops of nothingness. They survived, only to remind me that I had come far, yet whenever I looked back, all those years would seem close. Perhaps the window to those frozen chunks remained to remind me all that could have been, but all that shouldn't have been too. And from every step that I took forward, I moved into new meadows but this window moved with me, and I looked back, to take a glimpse of all the pages again. Being helplessly foolish, perhaps greedy to travel back and forth into that hilltop that cried for me, or that road which I had cried for. They have transformed, so have I my journey had been evolving me into someone I had to be, my age had been moving forth, but that window kept adding frames of those forgotten tales I had once intended to live. So one day I painted that window and kept it as a memoir of who I was, to celebrate who I had become. And from that day on it became a legend to be remembered in old tales, which did not matter any more. I peeped into the chunks of snow and found them looking back at me but they are ghosts of memories to live tales of someone else now. June 28, 2020 STRAND COMPLETELY NEW(2) any theme any form Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand ~Winner: 1st Place

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Date: 7/1/2020 1:06:00 PM
I have enjoyed your memoirs so completely Congratulations on your beautiful 1st place . xo
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Date: 7/4/2020 2:40:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed my words. Thank you for your kind appreciation :) Much love
Date: 6/30/2020 9:07:00 AM
Exceptional poetry my friend. I am delighted to have found such wondrously wrought verses and inner depths from a poet's true heart revealed.. Again, a fav. God bless...
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Date: 6/30/2020 2:29:00 PM
I am glad you love my words Robert. Thank you for your kind visit and gracious words of encouragement. God bless you :)
Date: 6/30/2020 7:24:00 AM
Loved the last two stanzas very much.. Haunted memories..:-) Congratulations on your top win mam:-) Keep writing and inspiring. Much love~Deepa
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Date: 6/30/2020 2:29:00 PM
I am glad you love my words dear Deepa! Thanks for your gracious appreciation. Blessings and lots of love :)
Date: 6/29/2020 9:32:00 PM
Wonderful poem of memories. congrats on your win!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:28:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and gracious appreciation. Blessings :)
Date: 6/29/2020 8:31:00 PM
Such a creative and original verse. I simply love it!! God bless you with many more amazing writes. Love, Gina
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Date: 6/30/2020 2:28:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and kind words of appreciation Gina! Blessings and love :)
Date: 6/29/2020 8:09:00 PM
Beautifully executed my dear, Aditi, the quality of your endeavor here is simply immeasurable, my compliments on your 1st Place achievement -- Aloha~@William
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:27:00 PM
I am really honored by your visit and kind words of appreciation William! Thank you. Blessings :)
Date: 6/29/2020 10:36:00 AM
at the beginning all was great....never did i ever anticipate....all the rocky roads and obstacles....it seemed to pass was impossible....then i looked so very deep inside....what do you know, i found my pride....so i gathered myself and i passed through....i will never return, i will leave them for you....very inspiring selection aditi....
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:26:00 PM
Your gracious comment is a wonderful interpretation of my thoughts Eric! Love these thoughtful words. Thanks for your visit and appreciation :) Blessings!
Date: 6/29/2020 6:19:00 AM
So beautiful Aditi. I absolutely loved this. Rashi
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Date: 6/30/2020 2:25:00 PM
Glad you love my words Rashi. Thank your for your visit and kind appreciation. Blessings and love :)
Date: 6/29/2020 5:33:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Meaningful reflections and memories...
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:25:00 PM
Thank you for your appreciation Kai. Blessings :)
Date: 6/28/2020 3:26:00 PM
but that window kept adding frames of those forgotten tales I had once intended to live...we all have to accept what we’ve accomplished even when it wasn’t the hoped for direction. Life is!
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Date: 6/28/2020 3:41:00 PM
True words Kim. We learn as we grow in our lives and when we look back these lessons seem destined even if we understand them quite late :) Thanks for your visit and kind words. Blessings and love

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