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Frozen Tears

Saline water , drips down her cheeks , cold and frozen , from her eyes it leaks . She weeps , sniffing , all the grief , inside herself . They abandoned her.. she's found on the street .. with a box of matches... and nothing to eat . Her mother is no more , her dad is asleep , with a loud snore , a mouse creeps up his sleeve . Thin and weak , like a fairy's frail wings , her eyes red , pain flaring in her. She can't bear it , she is going to go, meet her mother , and have a happy heaven life...

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Date: 12/25/2013 10:17:00 AM
Beautiful expression of sadness Saanvi congratulations on your win with this lovely poem here. Keep up good work . Your soup friend Michael
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Date: 12/19/2013 6:35:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your well deserved win,Saanvi
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Date: 12/18/2013 10:47:00 PM
Saanvi, hi.... how are you my young friend.. Haven't heard from you. I hope you are well... Sending smiles... Congratulations, and thank you for supporting my contest. Linda
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Date: 12/13/2013 4:43:00 AM
Hi saanvi, congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 12/13/2013 1:33:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem and congrats, Saanvi
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Date: 12/12/2013 12:34:00 PM
All the poetry submitted was heartfelt. From love throughout life to love in the depths of death with reflections of nature. You are all deserving First Place Winners and I thank you for entering your favorites in my contest.
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Date: 11/8/2013 10:56:00 AM
Sad one..This scene is repeated in places all over the world from day to day..Enjoyed reading your caring thoughts..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/8/2013 7:46:00 AM
This leaves one feeling sad and hopeful at the sametime...I hope she finds a way out...but heaven and mother will welcome...beautifully written
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Date: 11/7/2013 5:26:00 AM
i feel pity.
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