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Frozen Pond

As I walk next to the frozen pond The early morning sun was rising from behind the hill in the distance Its warm rays peek through the line of maples The air was still, the day was quiet Only yesterday’s snow crunches with each step I take, And the new freshly fallen powdery snow swooshes out from under my boots I wondered, as I peered at the icy pond, would it support my weight Should I venture across? I would reach the road faster by cutting across, and decided to risk it Gingerly I stepped, one foot at a time, holding my breath, closing my eyes, Listening for the ominous crack The air was still, the day was quiet I hastened my step, quickly, lightly It was a narrow, but a long pond, and deep for one so small My heart pounded at the thought of its bottom Nearing the center, the belly of this beast, a sharp noise stopped me like a statue On the frozen pond

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/15/2014 8:26:00 AM
Never cross a frozen pond without the need of God to help you.
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Date: 3/25/2009 9:56:00 AM
Your way with words and your ability to make your readers see through your pen's eye is remarkable...I was in this piece, absorbing the beauty and coldness of it all...thanks for sharing this piece.
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Date: 3/17/2009 5:55:00 PM
We still have a bunch of that white stuff here in North Dakota, but it has been melting rapidly there last few days. They are expecting flooding in the area--hopefully our home will stay dry. I know this poem has a deeper meaning than the weather. Still it seemed fitting at this time for me. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 3/17/2009 9:44:00 AM
Is this not what our life is ... a moment of risk ... a crossing of the pond, this is a a powerful analogy. Thanks for sharing, God bless you
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Date: 3/17/2009 5:50:00 AM
you descriptions ... got me all chilled here! lovely write! ~ Arany
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