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Frozen In Time

~~ Hand in hand they meander through the deserted lane, freshly fallen snow crumpling under foot Littering the sky, Bright stars, glittering like coins on a belly dancers belt, slowly surrender to the coming dawn Inch by measured inch the glory of Ra overpowers the starlight. In a pale blue sky, a pale golden disc, the colour of ripe oats at harvest time, looking close enough, and cool enough, to reach out and touch. Brilliant rays, arrows of liquid gold, capture the pristine landscape, splintering like a million shards of shattered glass. No sound, only silence, profound, in the clear crystal air. In the distance, a cock crows. Long morning shadows cast by tall pines, revealing a lone stoat, resplendent in his ermine coat. Emerging from shade, merging with sunlight, loping across the virgin snow with bounding grace. White on white, only the black tip of his tail and tiny footprints betraying his presence. In the distance, a dog barks, A small cottage, a stone chimney, a whisper of smoke announcing a new day, A hardy little robin pecking with determination to uncover water under ice. A door slams, the robin takes flight. Snow slides from the roof to gather in piles like miniature Himalayas. Icicles drop pearls as the thaw sets in. The world is awakening. In the distance, a train whistles. Still holding hands they walk on. ~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/6/2011 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Pictures of winter" contest Margaret. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2011 1:31:00 AM
It was like wlaking down a lane for real loved it lass xx
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Date: 12/5/2011 10:55:00 PM
Oh, the imagery Margaret. I love it. Congratulations
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Date: 2/8/2011 3:48:00 AM
This is breath-taking, Margaret. Thank you for sharing. Elaine
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Date: 2/6/2010 5:40:00 PM
You have me smiling with this uplifting story. Love the last line. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comment. keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 1/30/2010 11:52:00 AM
Beautiful and descriptive write. Nice transition of night to morning. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/30/2010 1:35:00 AM
The transition from night to day is so vivid as seen through the eyes of the couple as they take their winter stroll, Margaret. The reader can see the beauty of nature so well, it's like we are walking with them. Outstanding writing! Love, carolyn
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Date: 1/29/2010 6:49:00 PM
This is a short movie, Margaret! A beautiful write! Great job as usual Peace and love, Audrey Thank you for your kind comments on my poems!
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Date: 1/29/2010 8:06:00 AM
THis is outstanding work, a masterpiece of words, margaret. right into favs!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/29/2010 7:53:00 AM
So beautiful.....it seems to be a scene from a wonderful story, or a classic movie, or a beautiful painting.....descriptions are captivating! A lovely poem, Margaret. Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/29/2010 4:05:00 AM
Great pictures Margaret this poem is alive, i feel like am watching something on TV maybe a movie~~
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Date: 1/29/2010 3:19:00 AM
The imagery flows before the readers eyes in this wonderful write. I too loved the ending.
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Date: 1/29/2010 1:24:00 AM
So much to see and take in with this poem, Margaret. I love how you conclude the walk outside in the last two lines. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/29/2010 12:54:00 AM
You paint a lovely scene - enjoyed the read, the belly dancer bit is nice description but I felt it was a little out of place In a poem about snow, very pretty - thanks for sharing
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