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Frozen In Time

Cleaning for a yard sale, it was that old envelope she found The envelope worn and frail, but the ribbon around it still bound A tear coming to her eye as she knew what was inside And the memories she couldn't deny, as she sat there and cried She began opening it, but then she stopped and just thought In being unable to admit, there is no peace in what she had sought She laid it on the bed, then went outside and began to pray All those thoughts in her head, all those things she couldn't say Her anguish and her pain, all cleansed from her heart, What could she explain? It was no fault on her part, It was he who had broken up, his very last letter, She wished he had spoken up, she would have felt better, Three years had gone by now, since his last correspondence To God alone did she bow in her deepest darkest despondence His words she knew by heart, but wished for a second chance To forgive him and have a fresh start at God-given romance Unraveling that bow, and one last time reading the card It was time to let go, even though letting go would be so hard Keeping her forgiveness as prime, her painful bitterness was gone No more frozen in time, with God's gracious help, she moved on.

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Date: 11/14/2019 10:12:00 PM
Well penned. The suspense was breathtaking. Congrats to you both on your collaboration and well deserved top win.
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Vincent Flannery
Date: 11/15/2019 4:00:00 AM
Thank you Line. I must say I had an excellent partner in this contest. God Bless.
Date: 11/14/2019 5:14:00 PM
So well written! Congrats to you both!
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Vincent Flannery
Date: 11/15/2019 3:59:00 AM
Thank you Juliet. I couldn't have done it without Jo Daniel. She is an excellent writer and added so much. Have a Blessed day.
Date: 11/14/2019 2:50:00 PM
Congrats to you both! Enjoyed this wonderful piece!;)
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Vincent Flannery
Date: 11/14/2019 2:57:00 PM
Thank you Brenda. Have a Blessed day.
Date: 11/14/2019 2:09:00 PM
A lovely spiritual poem and a collaboration of great quality, especially as i cant tell it was written by two different people.. .thanks for taking part..
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Vincent Flannery
Date: 11/15/2019 4:01:00 AM
Thank you Silent One for this wonderful contest and allowing me to collaborate with such a great poet as Jo Daniel. I really enjoyed it. God Bless You.
Date: 11/11/2019 6:33:00 AM
It was a wonderful experience working with you, Vincent:) and I simply love the end result, hope Silent One does too:)
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Vincent Flannery
Date: 11/11/2019 12:56:00 PM
Thank you Jo Daniel, and the feeling is mutual.. I enjoyed doing this contest very much.

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