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Frozen In Cyrstalline Number 7

The moon so close it was touchable, framed mid the snow clad ancient trees. written 11/21/2014 contest: Frozen in Crystalline sponsor: Andrea syllables 9/8

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Date: 4/5/2015 11:19:00 PM
Shadow, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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Date: 11/30/2014 3:29:00 PM
I love the picture you created, Shadow! Congrats to you on an awesome win! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 11/30/2014 1:55:00 AM
SHADOW, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/30/2014 12:56:00 AM
my, a wonderful scene fro here, shadow..cheers to you for your great win
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Date: 11/29/2014 10:14:00 PM
beautiful! kudos Shadow.. :)!
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Date: 11/29/2014 6:27:00 PM
Shadow, congratulations for your win! Nice imagery! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/29/2014 3:45:00 PM
Lovely Shadow...big congrats to you
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Date: 11/29/2014 2:23:00 PM
Hi Shadow, Very nice win. Excellent images and structure. Have a great week end. Earl
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:24:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Shadow:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:41:00 PM
ty Jan hugs
Date: 11/29/2014 9:22:00 AM
Congratulations Shadow.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/29/2014 12:42:00 PM
ty Rick hugs
Date: 11/29/2014 9:00:00 AM
You can just walk over and touch the moon! Very nice.
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:42:00 PM
ty Abdul hugs
Date: 11/29/2014 8:26:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..There are some very interesting and descriptive works in the winner's list..A fine group of poets gather at this soup pot..Sara..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I appreciate you reading and finding my work worthy..I got Queenie when I was 7 and she died from a heat stroke when I was 17..
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:44:00 PM
ty Sara hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/29/2014 8:26:00 AM
She was a collie rough coat herding dog..My father loved her..Sara
Date: 11/29/2014 6:22:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Shadow
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:44:00 PM
ty Joseph hugs
Date: 11/29/2014 6:20:00 AM
Love your descriptive poem, Shadow; you paint a lovely picture! Congrats on your fine win. // paul
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:43:00 PM
ty Paul hugs
Date: 11/29/2014 1:21:00 AM
Congrats Shadow on the win , a nice picture you printed here...huggs
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Date: 11/29/2014 5:08:00 AM
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:58:00 AM
Lovely poem on the touchable moon. I am surprised more poets did not choose to go with picture number seven!! Congrats to you in my contest, shadow dear.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/29/2014 5:07:00 AM
ty for the honour Andrea it was fun to write it hugs
Date: 11/25/2014 5:25:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Very descriptive of the scene..Way to go for the contest..Sara
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Date: 11/25/2014 4:04:00 PM
ty Sara hope all is well hugs
Date: 11/23/2014 8:45:00 PM
I love the beautiful imagery in just these two short lines! Very nicely done, Shadow. Good luck in Andrea's contest!
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Date: 11/25/2014 4:03:00 PM
ty dear Kelly appreciated hugs
Date: 11/22/2014 9:41:00 AM
Was it supposed to be 17 sylables per line or 17 total??? If so I will have to rewrite mine. I like what you have done with it.
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Date: 11/22/2014 11:58:00 AM
it is me Rick 17 syllables I have adjusted it ty hugs
Date: 11/22/2014 12:50:00 AM
Wow great painting with words Shadow! Gl in contest!
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Date: 11/22/2014 3:31:00 AM
ty Dr Upma appreciated hugs
Date: 11/21/2014 10:26:00 PM
I see the moon dancing in the tree tops. Very nice.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/22/2014 3:30:00 AM
ty David so happy you like it hugs
Date: 11/21/2014 8:20:00 PM
i love it....PD
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Date: 11/22/2014 3:30:00 AM
hey there have missed you lots Linda ty hugssss
Date: 11/21/2014 7:17:00 PM
Sounds like a beautiful picture Shadow. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/22/2014 3:28:00 AM
ty Brenda so pleased you like it hugs
Date: 11/21/2014 6:25:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Shadow - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/22/2014 3:28:00 AM
ty Jan hugs

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