Frozen Cold

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Winter slowly creeps into my veins Small snowflakes covering my eyelids Seductively whispering Cold rain Hailstorm torturing my weak soul Blinding storm intoxicating numbness Standing on the frozen lake Cold blood It lashes, lashes, it calls me, calls me Wants me to drown in this killing chilling darkness below Cold water Save me here, find me in the blistering blizzard blistering cold, warm me, warm my self Embrace me and love me Love me *** Poem by Darren White November 4, 2016

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/4/2016 2:07:00 PM

aww Darren I will send you an extra big hug - I feel chilled reading the wintery imagery but I love the uplifting ending:-) hugs Hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/4/2016 7:12:00 PM

ha ha ha hubby won't let me have a onsie says it;s just an adult babygrow lol but I do have a thermal vest and leggings lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White
Date: 11/4/2016 2:14:00 PM

Thank Jan :) Can I borrow your nice wollen onesie too? Hugs, Darren xx