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Frost comes as snow without clouds, bringing a brilliance to the dawn. I allow myself a moment to admire it, to see the many shapes of the water crystals. In only an hour it will rise up into the blue sky, a soft vapor in the brisk winter breeze.
cold winter morning outside surfaces dusted winter’s cold makeup feet crunch frozen grass breath of steam is quickly gone Jack Frost takes a bite

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Date: 12/31/2023 1:01:00 PM
You did an amazing job with this! I love the last three stanzas- where Jack Frost takes a bite!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/31/2023 5:47:00 PM
thank you, Paige....I liked those stanzas as well. Grateful for your visits in 2023. See you in 2024, hugs, Sara
Date: 12/31/2023 7:02:00 AM
Much enjoyed the beauty of frosty images you convey, Sara. Moments splendidly captured.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/31/2023 5:47:00 PM
thank you, Vijay. You are appreciated, Sara
Date: 12/31/2023 6:09:00 AM
You described the cold nature really well Sara.. full of imagery as always..
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/31/2023 5:47:00 PM
thanks, Silent One. Hope my words didn't freeze your muse :-) smiles Sara
Date: 12/30/2023 6:01:00 PM
Brrr. This is a cold halbun. I've gone through many winters with Jack Frist weather.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/30/2023 7:06:00 PM
me too...even here in Texas. Some winters can be brutal.

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