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From Where I Stand

(A take on Romeo and Juliet) The fates of time were too unkind You left the little girl behind Too long the passage time cannot heal We play the cards the gods do deal Yet still you are so young and beautiful And I love you so, your lips of cherry wine Your eyes that doth shine Shame the stars that glow If sleight of hand or trick of sight Could have brought their love to light, So many long years ago Into the river of love they’d flow The water’s pure would take our love Then reflect on these years we didn’t share Worth the wait you’re everything I adore So take this heart I offer to you Their minds and hearts entwined as one To finish what their love begun To dance the dance that lovers do You with me and I with you. Fate did find, eyes and arms satisfied With your angelic smile your gentle touch Your kiss so tenderly I plea, never set me free, And you’ll forever be young and beautiful to me! © Harry J Horsman 2016 © Mandy Tams 2016

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Date: 3/5/2016 7:44:00 PM
Revisiting this one. one of your best posts of the new year, this one you did with Mandy
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Date: 2/23/2016 8:38:00 AM
This is so romantic and lovely.
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Date: 1/28/2016 9:10:00 AM
Words so gracious. Beauty so outspoken and creativity so explicit. I love this. Thanks for the beyond 7 share.
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Date: 1/23/2016 6:17:00 PM
I really enjoyed the beautiful flowing lines in this lovely and romantic poem... Very nicely written, Harry!
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Date: 1/23/2016 12:06:00 PM
Wisdom and arts hug as twins in between your lines. A wonderful 7
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Date: 1/9/2016 12:05:00 PM
Excellent love feeling is deeply expressed as "Never set me free and you’ll forever be young and beautiful to me!". A lovely true genius heart can say in this way that you possess certainly. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 1/8/2016 10:02:00 PM
Harry, thanks for seeing my poem about Jenny. I hope to see some new writing from you soon.
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Date: 1/6/2016 7:11:00 AM
Harry wow remarkable narration and splendidly done.. mood is nice. i enjoyed the read..~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 1/6/2016 1:17:00 AM
Wow very nice..... i like it for real.. so Romantic
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Date: 1/5/2016 7:20:00 PM
excellent write Harry
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Date: 1/5/2016 5:31:00 PM
this is so romantic. It reminds me of the poem I just wrote about my first kiss and how this could relate to it since I was so young, like when Romeo met Juliet. Good job you too, and thanks for what you said at my poem, Harry.
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Date: 1/5/2016 12:40:00 PM
endearing piece with a mood that slays me... splendidly done, harry!..huggs
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Date: 1/5/2016 11:36:00 AM
A pleasure to read. Harry, sending smiles. SKAT
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Harry Horsman
Date: 1/5/2016 11:38:00 AM
happy new year, to you just love your smile
Date: 1/5/2016 11:11:00 AM
love it harry well done, lovely to see how you worked them together xx
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Harry Horsman
Date: 1/5/2016 11:15:00 AM
Thanks Mandy for the inspiration
Date: 1/5/2016 10:51:00 AM
A very appreciable take on the story indeed, Harry. Great rhythm and consistency.
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Harry Horsman
Date: 1/5/2016 11:39:00 AM
thanks Michael will catch up on your poems..

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