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From Time To Time Quatern

From Time To Time Quatern Contest Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich From time to time I searched for you you found me all bruised black and blue your sky set the sun in the west I'm your expressions, feeling blessed. By the rainbow, below the moon from time to time I searched for you my effort didn't come too late for you, my love, were worth the wait. You kneeling down on bended knee proposal was a guarantee from time to time I searched for you Thank you, sweetheart, for my rescue. Words exchanged during sacred vows kiss me above my right eyebrow thanks, my love, you chose to pursue from time to time I searched for you.
Note to Judge: The word "blessed" can have one or two syllables depending on how you pronounce it. In this poem I wrote it as one syllable. There are exactly eight syllables in each line. Thank you
Date Written: January 25, 2016

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Date: 2/7/2016 12:58:00 PM
Such a lovely Quatern, so romantic and heartfelt. Nicely done, and congratulations on your placement! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/7/2016 6:37:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Luloo!
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Date: 2/7/2016 6:18:00 AM
Congrats to you, Luloo...poignant and memorable.
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Date: 2/7/2016 5:37:00 AM
A beautiful Quatern, dear Laura. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:50:00 PM
Laura, thanks for your entry. I really enjoyed the departure you made from the usual type of format. This idea was so sweet! Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 2/7/2016 11:19:00 AM
Thank you Andrea :) *thanks* -Luloo
Date: 1/27/2016 4:25:00 PM
I'm glad you found each other and you remain together through good times and bad ... LuLoo this is so heartwarming I was uplifted reading your words:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/27/2016 5:27:00 PM
Thank you lady :) *Smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/25/2016 11:56:00 PM
i must hasted to add how heartwarming this piece is, laura.. you flow!..huggs
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/26/2016 9:37:00 AM
Thank you sweet lovely lady :) Be blessed *smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/25/2016 1:47:00 PM
Lovely, thank you!!!
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Date: 1/25/2016 12:03:00 PM
True love once again finds verse, Very nice.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/25/2016 12:05:00 PM
Thano you very much Daniel...*smiles*-luloo

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