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Although you have vanished, now oceans apart Your window kindles like a first star My eyes pierce the darkness like moths on the wing seduced by the brilliance while reaching for the sun Between us in tall grass of burnished fields the longing wind is calling for your name You never knew the secret I've concealed of love that could ignite a golden flame Bathed in the starlight streaming far from your window I touch the pillow that is empty beside me cold without light from the moon
------------------------------------------------------------------ 8/18/16 For Contest: IT TAKES FOUR Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Date: 8/24/2016 7:58:00 PM
Beautiful and creative images in this. Congrats on your win, Carrie! Blessings!
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Date: 8/23/2016 10:59:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/22/2016 1:24:00 PM
Carrie , CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem ~
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Date: 8/22/2016 12:25:00 PM
Carrie, a lovely poem sweet lady...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 8/21/2016 8:02:00 PM
I like your passionate confession. I'm trying to wrap my mind around the last line, "cold without light from the moon." Congrats! :-)
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Date: 8/18/2016 2:22:00 PM
very beautiful, carrie! the final verse is a knockout. best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 8/18/2016 12:33:00 PM
Pretty but melancholic, Mrs Carrie. Leaves one with a sense of longing for another time and place. It never ceases to amaze me , how a well written poem can stir so much emotion.
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