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From the Shadows

From the shadows The taste of bitterness lingers on tongues Before it bathes them in anxieties And they emerge stripped of mind, Altering into mindless fiends As hope drowns in the murky waters They once come from. Mothers cry sad songs As sons and daughters were ripped from breasts Forced into the lives their keepers know too well And those resisting struggle for sustenance, With legs open for a few pennies in pockets To chase the hunger away. As fathers flee like insects Their young left in dustbins like rubbish To propagate in the waste they were born to, Falling astray becoming wild creatures And gangs welcome them with a warm embrace Taught to sling guns and knives until They rest in small graves. From the shadows they dwell Trapped without hope.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/6/2013 5:54:00 PM
A heart wrenching poem....congratulations on your win...
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Date: 8/5/2013 7:47:00 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, much appreciated.
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:58:00 AM
:-) Congratulations!!! ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:11:00 AM
Ronny... Congratulations in Richard's "Girl Rising." contest.... always *LINDA
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Date: 8/4/2013 5:02:00 PM
The ability to treat concern and love for the young is not a talent.... It is a blessing/ Congratulations on your win.... Jake
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Date: 7/26/2013 12:10:00 AM
what a powerful poem this is. Especially the last two stanzas Wow!! did this one place in the contest?
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Date: 7/25/2013 12:27:00 PM
Awesome poetry Ron; vivid images shared. Enjoy the rest of your week.
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Date: 7/25/2013 10:34:00 AM
Truth you have penned but all circumstances can change..Enjoyed reading your voice..Thanks for the visit..Sara
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Date: 7/25/2013 5:17:00 AM
- A very touching poem Ronny! - The world and life has its shadow sides, and you have described them well in your poem. - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Ronny Madonsela
Date: 7/25/2013 5:29:00 AM
Thanx Anne, and its a pleasure. you always have a great read for me awaiting on your page

Book: Shattered Sighs