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There is a woven vine, that grows It grows between the centuries Two centuries old, it can't be seen Between two selves it has a hold on me, and all my reasoning Defying time that lies between I've read each word between the lines The tale unfolds, the words are mine Bringing with them all the years I can feel a sense of who I was Words I spoke, and one I loved is captured still within my soul,.. And though I spoke a different tongue... Somewhere there played a different song I feel the pull so deep inside How strange and crazy, this may be I know somewhere, away from here Somewhere deep on different shores The stars are meant to cross again There is a woven vine, that grows between Two centuries old, it can't be seen Between the old, and now, the new it has a hold, that I do know defies all lucid reasoning _____________________________________________________________ For The Contest Sponsored By Carolyn Devonshire "Past Lives" 6/24/14

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Date: 7/5/2014 10:12:00 PM
Lovingly and beautifully told. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/30/2014 4:21:00 AM
Hi Carrie, this is so expressive and it is shrouded in misty reasoning that swirls through time. Congrats on a very deserved win. // paul
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Date: 6/30/2014 12:17:00 AM
Absorbing thoughts penned here, congrats on the win, Carrie
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Date: 6/29/2014 10:31:00 PM
Wonderful Carrie a well deserved high place.....Seren
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Date: 6/29/2014 8:19:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & love
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Date: 6/29/2014 8:05:00 PM
Love your poem Big Congrats!
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Date: 6/29/2014 7:36:00 PM
Deep and profound and intoxicating all at the same time. Magnificant writing, Carrie. Many congrats on your top place win. bfn Elaine
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Date: 6/29/2014 7:11:00 PM
this poem is haunting in its reality..congratulation on your win
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Date: 6/29/2014 5:13:00 PM
hauntingly beautiful, Carrie. Congrats on a great win.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/29/2014 3:43:00 PM
One has to delve deep into the writers mind and follow this creation to bring together their pasts to present, that it's taken two centuries to be unfurled. I have to cement 'Barbara's comment totally. So cleverly crafted, James :)
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Date: 6/29/2014 3:40:00 PM
Hi Carrie, this is such a beautiful, mystical write transporting the reader along with you to a different place and time. Congratulations on another well-deserved top win! Pandita.
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Date: 6/29/2014 2:42:00 PM
I can see why Carolyn loved this..mysterious and beautifully written. Congrats. Bg
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