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Clouds dim from a fevered night bare as skin of dragonflies’ grasp, and I pace along tattered leaves strewn on barbed fences of life moaning through a distant breeze: yet the candle burns inside my heart to feed dire hunger of jailed souls.... There, street women circle around in a furnace of hope...on a barren lane where mangled sparrows cry in despise; and my will to plod an inner odyssey rages, searching for some need to fill breaths of peace not for myself but for a biting desire I cannot explain, that my own pain hollers from the marrow... the kind that flames the stars and rain. John Lawless' Bite Me 6/8/2015 ~ inspiration from Les Miserables as gleaned from my gender counseling

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Date: 6/12/2015 8:36:00 AM
This is an impressive piece of work. I really feel this one. 7
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Date: 6/12/2015 12:25:00 AM
Nice win Nette. PD
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Date: 6/12/2015 12:21:00 AM
Wow great take nette! Congrats on ur win!
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Date: 6/11/2015 3:51:00 PM
Nette, this poem haunted me. Had to include it in the "winners" for its very unique biting quality. Thanks you for participating in the contest.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/12/2015 8:38:00 AM
You made an excellent choice!
Date: 6/11/2015 3:35:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations in John's BITE ME contest. **SKAT**
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Date: 6/9/2015 12:59:00 PM
oh a question for ya. Would you let me know if it is wrong to use "free verse" as the category of your newest contest? I think I saw you called it free verse but others are using verse. It doesn't matter, does it?
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Date: 6/9/2015 12:44:00 PM
That burning desire is always there deep down inside and we cannot escape it until its fulfilled... I love the imagery in this emotive piece. Beautifully done, Nette! Good luck in John's contest!
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Date: 6/9/2015 4:58:00 AM
Passionate contest entry..Way to go..Very expressive work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 6/8/2015 6:42:00 PM
A beautiful inspiration, bette.
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Date: 6/8/2015 3:45:00 PM
Been gone for awhile and missed your poetry. I got fired-up by the depth and incessant power of your work! Glad to have read it!
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Date: 6/8/2015 2:32:00 PM
Hauntingly captivating with a strong , raging message. This brave poem is truly compelling!
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Gabby Sabre
Date: 6/8/2015 2:34:00 PM
Thank you for choosing my work in your contest.
Date: 6/8/2015 11:19:00 AM
- A very skilled writing, Nette - Beautiful - Good luck in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/8/2015 10:08:00 AM
Nette, so beautifully penned and wonderful for the contest, a 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, after all these years. ..The inscription will be done within the next 2 weeks
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Date: 6/8/2015 8:25:00 AM
Both sense of fury and will come alive in this strong poem. I was there!
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