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From the Crow's Nest, That April Night

The night was perfect on this unsinkable boat as the man in the crow’s nest kept watch. He fumbled to find his binoculars, but they were gone. “It’s okay,” he said, vowing he’d do the best that he could. The vessel sailed, The Atlantic dark as the sky; the waning crescent moon had already set. The surface of the water was as smooth as a mirror, and as he blinked his eyes he envisioned couples dancing in opulence below deck. Some mate had told him, they’d make the crossing in record time. He thought of his wife and children waiting back home, thinking once he’d make shore he’d wire them to say it was a glorious journey, indeed. Until something loomed ahead like a ghost. He squinted and squinted to see what it could be. He thought that it could be something or nothing; the mate had told him the waters were clear, but when he notified the captain, it was too late. He and 1500 others died that April night, but some lived to tell the tale. Three nights later the stars shone on his grave on the shores of Newfoundland.

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Date: 12/18/2021 9:36:00 AM
The tragic tale so well penned... from the beginning till the end... Very descriptive Mike.. God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 11/19/2021 12:52:00 PM
Mike, this story, narrative poem held me, mind and heart, from the start. Super rhythm and imagery. I also liked all references to sight and its lack. Very talented pen!
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Date: 11/13/2021 10:03:00 AM
I agree with Paulette. Could be the script for a movie!! A different one from the short poems you usually eat!!
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Date: 11/13/2021 9:20:00 AM
Hi Mike, You could have written the script for the movie.... Great Write! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 11/12/2021 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations, Mike!
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Date: 11/12/2021 10:52:00 AM
I enjoyed your free verse architecture and flow on the tale of the Titanic. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 11/11/2021 10:34:00 PM
A tragic incident. Great work. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/11/2021 3:12:00 PM
Poor fellow... Forgot to call for Ghostbusters! ~ Bill Murray
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Date: 11/11/2021 8:56:00 AM
A story well told, Mike. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 11/10/2021 9:14:00 AM
Guess this is about the Titanic. Or it could be another ship. Your writing is fabulous. Deserves recognition.
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