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From the Bottom I Reach

I awake..no sound..im knocked down.. I cry, I try, I go through the day but bearley get by.... Im lost in darkness..trying to find a way out... My heart searches for something.... But I don't know what it's about... I'ts deep...I reach for things that I shouldn't... Things that are not me..... Something release me ..... Someone step in...... This pain is so deep... This pain's deep within... No one's around..... I'm far beyond reach...i've sunk to the bottom... I'm to far to be reached....untill... I suffered to long...god gave me a song... Insperation unknown, I'm alive, I won... Sometimes the journey through life, starts out real strong and ends up with pain and loss, and you can't go on.... So you search for the thing's that happiness brings...there's just so much despair, the happiness is not there.... We have to reach beyond, dig, and find...we each have a song, a love that is strong...

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Date: 11/22/2011 5:32:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Jennifer. I am sorry to be late welcoming you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 11/21/2011 8:58:00 PM
Enjoyed this well expressed thoughts , Jennifer
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