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From Here To Eternity

distance is the place from here to there one letter makes the difference in the whole affair and that letter a cross to which i am aware to what end should i prepare to think of such things we must dare decide where we're going and then declare such a subject we handle with care be kind to our soul it's only fair and then be something fit for the air cover the distance from here to there don't find your self in the middle of dispair use that cross to make the repair

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Date: 2/3/2014 5:08:00 PM
Was the misspelled word in your title intentional? I have a feeling the world "eturnity" contained the "letter" that made the difference in the whole affair. Also, in your 24th line, "dispare" should be correctly spelled "despair". This was simply written and easy to read.
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Date: 2/3/2014 8:14:00 PM
made corrections. the one letter that makes the difference is the letter "t" in the second line making it from "here to here" which is going no where. thank you.
Date: 12/28/2013 8:47:00 AM
I really enjoyed this one. Very creative and unique!
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Date: 12/19/2013 8:05:00 AM
Very interesting perspective!... Terry 8and thanks for your kind comments)
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Date: 12/8/2013 8:03:00 AM
Oh, I like it very much, John. Yes. It connects us to heaven and from then it connects us to others. Great one!
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Date: 12/8/2013 7:51:00 AM
This is an amazing write my dear friend John! A great write which inspires! Thank you so much for sharing! Thank u so much as well for your precious time stopping by on one of my poems. love and big hugs, LeonorA
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Date: 12/7/2013 4:58:00 PM
Bravo! Totally Enjoyable! Loved it!
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