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From Flower To Shell

I picked a rose of brilliant red A fine one I must say I laid it down beside her head And slowly turned away Before I left, I read the name Engraved upon the stone It was then that sadness came I knew I was alone It wasn't fair to take my love The only one I had I cursed the groung and sky above I felt so raging mad I swore that vengeance would be mine As I headed for the gate But how does someone turn the time Set forth by father fate I planned and schemed for days on end In hopes that I would find A way to live among the dead And find some peace of mind Insanity was on my trail I couldn't shake it loose I felt the wrath of living hell Tighten like a noose Since her love I couldn't save I felt so damned remote I went and laid beside beside her grave And left this final note I couldn't live while on the run From memories of the dead So I put a bullet in my gun And then into my head Rockman In response to early comments, this is just fiction. In fact it was written before I ever found love. I've been married since Oct. 2000 and going strong. :-) Sorry if I misled.

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Date: 6/9/2011 11:12:00 PM
amazing.:)
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Date: 5/23/2011 10:05:00 PM
nice dude! Well I kinda figured it was fiction, ya know, since uh you've got new stuff on here And Uh you are alive and all. Hey, but that's just me and the silly way I think! But seriously, I love this flow. Nice. I write inspirational fiction pieces too. ~JSLambert
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Date: 5/2/2011 9:47:00 PM
Randy, sad poem.. great write... the ending has deep emotions.. hope they are not there... enjoyed your poem..Linda
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Date: 5/2/2011 9:40:00 PM
Randy....What a heartfelt write!..JESUS MAN!...I have been here, lost my husband of 28 yrs..and then 10 yrs later a fiance' of 3 yrs...all I can tell ya is IT SUCKS!..I WAS FEELING YA!.....BIGTIME!..........but put that damm gun down!.....:( SugarbearUSA.............
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Date: 5/2/2011 9:40:00 PM
Randy....What a heartfelt write!..JESUS MAN!...I have been here, lost my husband of 28 yrs..and then 10 yrs later a fiance' of 3 yrs...all I can tell ya is IT SUCKS!..I WAS FEELING YA!.....BIGTIME!..........but put that damm gun down!.....:( SugarbearUSA.............
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