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From Behind the Oak

. From behind the oak mine eyne curved it's girth to spectate her quiet undress The leaves beneath mine feet screamed as my heart and hern flesh instantly became covered with cloth leaving me with poetic thoughts

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/29/2010 8:02:00 PM

There could have been a Peeping Tom in the woods. I like the essence of the poem and the images. Great job! Joseph

Oscar Mascarenhas

Date: 6/18/2010 7:44:00 AM

how i wish u had kept the pen flowing on this one......... :D its intriguing really.... to my favourites without a doubt cheers oscar

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/17/2010 7:57:00 AM

Exceptional!Awesome!This goes tmfs!Corva,lol!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/16/2010 7:04:00 AM

Excellent metaphoric language used to suggest something more than meets the eye..Keep the creative pen flowing producing demure luring writes..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 6/15/2010 9:15:00 AM

Nicely written and gives that sense of illusion that you want to see more, but can only imagine in your own mind. I loved it! Dan C

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/15/2010 8:45:00 AM

Very nicely written, James. You are a master at this type of poetry, saying just enough to provoke interest! Well done, my friend. Soup mail in a moment. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/15/2010 8:16:00 AM

Simply enjoyed it, James

Joshua Michael Dolezal

Date: 6/15/2010 7:48:00 AM

Hahaha. Very nice.