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I watch you from across the room, sunlight in your smile. Your laughter rings out, soothing like a gentle tide. What stories and dreams swirl within you, I long to know. Your eyes twin forest, deep and verdant, where I go. To wander daily in my mind, following imagined trails, trails that lead to whispered conversation, details unveiled. With patience and care, like a bird watcher still and quiet Hoping for a feathered glimpse, though shy, not to fright. You glide by, wind tossing your hair, oblivious to me, lost in your world of melody and colors I cannot see. I memorize each gesture, tuck them away with my affection, Hoping that someday I’ll find in myself the courage to mention. How your existence is a gift, one I unwrap each day as I wait for our paths to cross in some destined way. Where I can share the deep secret of my admiration and finally breathe easy, no longer in silent frustration.

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Date: 5/17/2024 6:40:00 PM
Dear Sara. A fantastic poetry centers on unexpressed adoration and yearning for someone, while seeing the individual from a distance and treasuring their existence. You delved into the profound range of emotions experienced towards the issue, emphasizing the want to establish a connection and express their sentiments.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/21/2024 5:46:00 AM
thanks, Sotto, for your visit and for your understanding of my poem. Color me grateful. Have a splendid day, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 5/17/2024 11:16:00 AM
Great poem.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/17/2024 6:37:00 PM
thank you kind sir. Wishing you a splendid evening, Sara

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