Frolic Dawn

. sun exposing fogs' mischievous morning antics tickling pecan trees .

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Date: 5/12/2010 5:39:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of this interesting perspective. Nice use of imagery. Keep on writing! Karen

John Freeman

Date: 4/26/2010 11:23:00 AM

Abe Congratulations on your # 7 Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/26/2010 5:41:00 AM

Congrats Abe on your winning poem in Raul's contest... wonderful words of description for the awesome photo..luv.. and enjoy your special win.. and thankxxx for providing a great contest on MLK for all of us...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/26/2010 3:43:00 AM

Abe, congratulations on your success in my Nature's Breath contest...Raul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/25/2010 11:05:00 PM

HOw CUTE and a clever way to see it!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/25/2010 10:05:00 PM

Your work is always a beauty to read Abe...Charma

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/25/2010 8:45:00 PM

gorgeous haiku! Abe! good luck! jimbo

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/25/2010 8:24:00 PM

Love this Haiku very much, Abe. Very creative write and descriptive. Good luck on the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 4/25/2010 6:16:00 PM

Abe~ A very interesting entry for the contest good luck! I enjoyed this much! Laura :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/25/2010 5:46:00 PM

This was a joy to read, Abe!! Tickling pecan trees...I wouldn't have thought of that one, but I love it!! :)