Frogspawn

polka dot promise bubble-wrapped to perfection ~ life in transition 03.04.21 Bite Size Poem no17 Line Gauthier

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Susan Ashley

Date: 2/6/2023 8:16:00 AM

Dear Wendy, your haiku is vivid and expressive. A moment in time beautifully captured, knowing a lifetime has begun. Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Wendy Watson
Date: 2/6/2023 9:11:00 AM

Thank you so much,Susan. To watch the transformation from polka dot to froglet with my children years ago, was amazing.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/4/2023 11:05:00 AM

- A creative Haiku, Wendy ... well done - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Wendy Watson
Date: 2/6/2023 12:35:00 AM

Thank you,Sunshine. Our pond is visited by frogs every year so the prompt was right in front of me!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/4/2023 10:18:00 AM

A huge CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Wendy. I'm amazed at how much meaning you packed into these three little lines! Janice

Wendy Watson
Date: 2/6/2023 12:36:00 AM

What a lovely comment,Janice. I'm glad you appreciated the image.

Ken Rone

Date: 4/21/2021 12:07:00 PM

"bubble-wrapped to perfection". Great idea. Its that time of year and a promise indeed!

Wendy Watson
Date: 2/6/2023 12:37:00 AM

Thank you so much for 'stopping by' to leave your appreciation,Ken.

Eric Cohen

Date: 4/17/2021 8:53:00 PM

Enjoyed this, Wendy. Haven't seen frog "bubble wrap" yet this year, but have heard them recently. Sure sign of Spring. Best to you. ~Eric

Wendy Watson
Date: 2/6/2023 12:38:00 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting, Eric. It's a yearly event in our pond and my son and I once videoed the progress from tiny black spot to froglet - an amazing journey!

John Watt

Date: 4/12/2021 8:49:00 PM

So imaginative, Wendy! Love the "bubble wrap" and the life in transition conclusion. Congrats for your win ~ John

Wendy Watson
Date: 2/6/2023 12:39:00 AM

How lovely to have your valued feedback,John and apologies that it's taken this long to express my appreciation!

Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/5/2021 1:40:00 PM

Wow, how great is this haiku! Congratulations on your deserving win, Wendy:-) Gotta FAV this...

Wendy Watson
Date: 4/6/2021 3:24:00 AM

Lovely to hear from you, Edward. Thank you for such a kind comment. This was prompted by seeing a fresh lump of frogspawn in the pond a few days ago.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/3/2021 11:38:00 AM

Well said and illustrated! Aloha! Rico

Wendy Watson
Date: 4/3/2021 12:53:00 PM

Thank you, Rico. It's sitting on top of our pond as I speak and it was wonderful to do a school project with my son when he was much younger watching the development to froglets.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/3/2021 9:58:00 AM

excellent what a vivid description indeed Wendy:-) hugs Jan xx

Wendy Watson
Date: 4/3/2021 12:56:00 PM

Thank you for the encouragement,Jan. From tiny spot to hopping amphibian. amazing!