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Frog Croaking

Sitting on his little lily leaf feeling alone legs dangling over the side wishing scratching his head top for that magic with his tiny webbed fingers frowns missing something above smiling Hair brained every single second sparks electric thoughts in warm glowing joy through the sunlight beams happiness Dew shining in your jewels sparkling magic visions enchants a blossoming dream begging that kiss The eyes popping out gasping awaiting his summer sun arriving a gem sparkling awe all over beauty Golden wonder whisked away this heart our souls when joined sang sweetest music all honor and love bows in bliss sunlight your colors utopia rainbow inside dreams In a chariot within your light bathing in the sweetest senses Lips off a spirit flies with the butterflies dancing within your beauty shining one amazing treasure princess I want to runaway elope with you dancing with you a ball within dreams

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Date: 1/23/2015 10:00:00 AM
smiling thank you ever so kindly robert wonderful comment dear pal deeply appreciated bless you
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Date: 1/23/2015 9:12:00 AM
My friend, congrats on your win.. Enjoyed this fine poetic offering this sweet morn! Bravoooo!!!!!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/23/2015 10:02:00 AM
sorry robert not with it at all these days put it in the wrong slot
Date: 1/15/2015 10:08:00 PM
I am glad I made you smile, Liam, thank you for the visit... LINDA
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/16/2015 12:54:00 PM
aah so very sweet of you linda it was a pleasure dear pal
Date: 1/15/2015 1:44:00 PM
wow what a vivid imagination you have liam the imagery here is delightful - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/15/2015 2:37:00 PM
thank you jan dear pal wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Date: 1/15/2015 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations Liam on your well desrved win!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/15/2015 12:41:00 PM
thank you dear pal smiling deeply appreciated
Date: 1/15/2015 1:16:00 AM
A wonderful imaginative Poem,kudos and congrats on the win Liam...huggs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/15/2015 1:24:00 PM
thank you so kindly for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated bless you
Date: 1/14/2015 10:40:00 PM
Liam, Stopping by to say hi and wish you the best when it comes to any soup contest. Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "A Penny For Your Thoughts." If you'd like:) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/15/2015 12:48:00 PM
thank you ever so kindly linda not really used blogs before smiling a penny for my thoughts wow ha ha my brain is overloaded lol see if i can get you there then
Date: 10/27/2014 1:22:00 AM
ha ha timothy knocked the wind out of the frog thank you so much for the very beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated
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Date: 10/27/2014 12:05:00 AM
Quite the fantastic visions for a frog sitting on a lily pad to have! I'm curious about this golden wonder that whisked away his heart... she, in all her splendor, must have been quite a site!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/27/2014 1:23:00 AM
sorry timothy not thinking wrote in the wrong slot
Date: 10/6/2014 9:49:00 AM
A beautiful combination of Love and Nature. Great Write, Liam!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/6/2014 10:46:00 AM
thank you ralph so kind your wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated dear friend
Date: 10/5/2014 7:44:00 AM
Liam . . . This is truly a most wonderful magical piece of writing!! The stunning imagery you use and the way you literally fuse phrases together, but in logical harmony, is enchanting indeed. I like the fact that your frog actually scratches his head. You knew what where and how to put you thoughts on this write to achieve a most positive effect. And your last two lines with leave the reader with that very touching fairy tale ending. Great Job!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/15/2015 2:40:00 PM
the magic is reading your comment gary the leprechaun is floating singing thank you kindly dear friend smiling pal
Date: 10/4/2014 11:22:00 PM
that was a sweet personification of the lovelorn and the magical fairy tale ending. Lots of pretty images.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/5/2014 1:58:00 AM
ahh thank you andrea for the truly beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciated god bless
Date: 10/4/2014 6:02:00 PM
a lonely frog on the lily pad, dreams the dream, the sweet not bad.... great poetry mate....
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/4/2014 6:24:00 PM
smiling don thank you so much touched deeply wonderful comment so kind of you god bless
Date: 10/4/2014 5:46:00 PM
The last four lines....magical. Froggy turns prince...how sweet.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/4/2014 6:20:00 PM
his little legs are growing lol eileen wonderful comment dear friend bless you
Date: 10/4/2014 4:11:00 PM
'I want to.runaway elope with you,dancing with you a ball within dreams.I can give this lady in your mind my glass slippers.Just beautiful Liam.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/4/2014 4:34:00 PM
charmaine smiling make sure you put plenty of bubble wrap lol around it we would not like it to be broken in the post ha ha might cut her beautiful feet wonderful comment pal heartfelt appreciated
Date: 10/4/2014 12:13:00 PM
A very dreamy and lovely piece here, Liam. I quite enjoyed it! I really like this line..."electric thoughts in warm glowing joy" Amazing expression and imagery throughout. This also stood out to me as well..."bathing in the sweetest senses Lips off a spirit flies with the butterflies dancing within your beauty "... awesome work!!~Always,Laura
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/4/2014 4:29:00 PM
laura what an amazing beautiful comment thank you so kindly heartfelt beautiful bless you
Date: 10/4/2014 7:30:00 AM
- Love it, Liam ..... always a pleasure to read what you post :) - The network "fell out" at my place yesterday .... only got into my own poems .... much to read today :))) - Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/4/2014 8:03:00 AM
well looks like you have a busy weekend ahead smiling internets do not mention i have had loads of problems on that score you have a great weekend also thank you kindly for the wonderful comment anne lise deeply appreciated

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