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Friendship

Friendship is a thread Made of trust and affection Easily breakable

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2012 4:10:00 AM

Jay great haiku, stopping by to say good night~PD

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/16/2012 1:32:00 AM

Well said. But strong friendships, cannot be broken. Tks

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 7/14/2012 9:34:00 AM

A marvelous HAIKU, well conceived and rendered! Best wishes, Keith

Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 7/14/2012 10:06:00 AM

thank you .jk

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/12/2012 2:28:00 PM

Well said, but you have one too many syllables in your last line. How about replacing "breakable" with "severed"?

Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 7/13/2012 9:16:00 AM

thank you .jk

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/12/2012 1:49:00 PM

Well written haiku, jk - oxox Anne-Lise

Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 7/13/2012 9:16:00 AM

thank you .jk

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/11/2012 12:40:00 PM

It was such a pleasure to read your poetry today JK. I hope to be able in the next few weeks to find the time and energy to read and comment. May you walk through the garden of inspiration and continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol

Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 7/12/2012 12:45:00 AM

thank you .jk

Richard Palmer

Date: 7/11/2012 10:18:00 AM

your friend ship is strong,in JA friendships are made from cob-web,lol great write Jayachandran

Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 7/11/2012 10:22:00 AM

thank you .jk

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2012 7:15:00 AM

I think it is not easily breakable if it is a strong friendship, but you are right about friendships that we often find online, they can be easily breakable! even good friends can sometimes break!

Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 7/11/2012 7:18:00 AM

thank you .jk

Mad Hu

Date: 7/10/2012 11:32:00 PM

True friendship means trust.Cant b broken if understood:)

Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 7/11/2012 12:34:00 AM

thank you .jk