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You stumble, lone and vulnerable, where's your safety net? you've given up the will to live, as low as as you can get. A man without a compass you're not looking for a star to see you safely home again, you'll find the nearest bar. Drowning in a sea of booze perspective's not so good, your friends will not abandon you as other people would. You make lame and tame excuses that you must rise above, excuses are no use at all, just put your trust in love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/8/2012 9:59:00 PM
I love the whole concept... always..pd
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Date: 6/30/2012 7:25:00 AM
Keith - so smooth line after line. This guy needs a little more than trust in love. Comes a time when friends and family refuse to take the pain.
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Date: 6/29/2012 8:26:00 AM
this reads so beautifully (talk about perfect cadence!) and has a powerful message. a wonderful poem!
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Date: 6/29/2012 4:13:00 AM
Oh wow just love this..
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Date: 6/28/2012 5:40:00 PM
That means alot when you know what that means. I'm liking your words man.
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Date: 6/27/2012 2:49:00 PM
Wow really like this Keith , well done and olve can lift us through many things xx
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Date: 6/27/2012 2:17:00 PM
soaring with the strength of your message, keith... life is worth living and living well... i am inspired by your poem so gloriously scribed!... :) hugggs!
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Date: 6/27/2012 11:46:00 AM
A true gift of He that dwells in Heaven above. Thank you my friend for your words penned speak His truth! Peace and blessings...
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