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Friend

What is a friend except a part of me My friends are love songs I was born to sing They are gifts who choose to really know me The ones who I trust with my everything True friends are the ones who truly can see What I have inside that I'm meant to bring They push me so hard and still let me be The fabric of my life, the weaver weaves Friends make me better, help me to believe First attempt at form

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Thvia Shetley

Date: 1/21/2013 1:39:00 AM

I like this form, will have to try it. I also like your thoughts on friends, don't know what I'd do without mine. They are essential to my well-being in life.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2013 9:35:00 PM

way to try a form, Richard. I like what you accomplished.

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 1/20/2013 7:55:00 PM

Wonderful first attempt Rick! That's what friends are for, supporting each other, understands and willingly to accept our weak and strong, and many more :D - hug, yanny

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/20/2013 1:14:00 PM

I'm not familiar with this form, but I like your poem! Friends are so important. Love, Kim

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/20/2013 3:47:00 PM

Thanks Kim

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 1/20/2013 12:53:00 PM

Yes, a friend helps us to be a better person. Love it, Richard. You are always trying new forms. I admire you. I don't do that. I like to be free, lol. Love ya, Toquyen

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/20/2013 3:49:00 PM

Within rules we discover new freedoms. Reading and following the instructions in the Bible are but one example.